You Light Up My Life

 

You Light Up My Life

 

You are my lightshow and my rainbow

Light in my darkest hour as you light

Up my life on the hottest of desert sands you are

My rainy season you give my life reason

Life is worth living because of you

Reviews

[Gandré]

sweet surrender and a special verbal act of admitting defeat in love.... loved it, too. great job.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great Debileah , The imagery is just awesome and very different from your style..
It also reminded me of a song (quite old though) "You light up my life..."

[Valentine]

This is a totally different style coming from you..I love the words themselves..but reading them in a row is some what strange to the ear..God bless..Valentine