Chocolates

 

C hocolate kisses are so sweet and delicious

H ave a midnight craving for a hot fudge sundae

O h for the love of chocolate ice cream

C hocolate is my favorite flavor 

O h for the love of chocolate moose

L icking a chocolate lollipop would be inviting

A box of chocolate covered cherries is seductive to me

T he love of chocolate has me under it's spell

E very night I raid the refrigerator for chocolate milk and cookies

S uch a sweet addiction chocolate should be illegal

Reviews

[Michael]

Hi D-

Thanks for the reviews and the read request, I always enjoy reading what you come up with. Although I am not a huge fan of sweets in general I have to admit every now and then chocolate is the only thing that will do. Had the idea maybe you should do a collection of acrostics about all the foods you like. Maybe even the ones you don't!

[pal]

mmmmmmmmmm .. what a combination.. chocolate and the lady.

A lovely compliment to the chocolate.

pal

[R J Askew]

I have a 2/3 eaten bar of 70 pct cocoa, fair trade, plain C on my desk here...wanna square? Ach, it's looking up at me from it's ripped silver boddice...not sure I can... Is there a choco-rehab? I think we both need the number. Enjoyed your tasty poem.

[Chaos]

I'm a huge fan of chocolate. I love the taste, the texture and the aroma. Nothing makes me smile more than watching chocolate being made, but look out if you try to take my chocolate because you might not leave with the same number of limbs. lol

Nice write.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh, I just LOVE chocolate. Now I wish I had some cause my mouth is watering. This is a cool and delicious acrostic, great job!!!

Heather

[LadyLove]

AHHHHHHHHHH, CHOCOLATE!! THE MAGIC WORD!!! Good lord I had to do that!! I love chocolate!! Now you made me crave it and I don't have a thing of it here.Grrrrrrrrrrr!!! Ok..tomorow I go out... and if I see a chocolate gingerbread man running by i'm going to take a bite out of him! Loved this...mmmm...wait... I have chocolate syrup! Yummy! Here I go...see ya tomorra! Blessings!

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

O.O i love this! You should join my club/writerscafe group, those who love chocolate and submit this in the group contest. I"m sure they would love this, i did.

Danni J

[Michael X]

Anybody who enjoys chocolate would appreciate such a delectable, sweet and teasing acrostic
I like how you define the scrumptious aspects and variety of chocolate- its versatile features-

the graphic and form matched nicely..a gave this poem a consistently desirous effect of craving
Nicely done, you put a caring amount of thought into every aspect, thanks for sharing.

Take care, Mike

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Excellent write - think I was drooling as I was reading ... haha - I so concur! There is nothing like Chocolate! Look how inspired you were here!!!! I think I hear a Dove bar calling......

Kath

[Laura E. Aranda]

Thanks for asking me to review this. You are one with acrostics....ha! Have you checked out the chocolate club here on writerscafe?
Cheers, lea

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

I use to love chocolate like that, but I changed and now chocolate is just chocolate. But I do remember craving it like a fiend every 28 days or so.

You wrote a tempting an inticing piece.