The Coffee Shop

(two poems acrostic)

The Coffee Shop Drive In

 

The coffee shop is always open to passers by

Coffee brewed just the way you like it steaming hot

Shop at the store then stop on by for a cup of java or two

Drive on up to our Drive In if you have the time the weather's fine

In our coffee shop you're sure to make many friends

 

The Coffee Shop II

 

T he coffee shop is the place to be

H aving long talks with all of our friendly servers

E venings and mornings we're always open to greet you

 

C an dance if you like while you play the jukebox

O rder a dinner or a desert if you like

F rench fries, a cheeseburger and a coke that's our specialty

F riends meet here all the time and make new friends too

E verybody makes themselves at home at our diner

E ach customer we leave satisfied

 

S o come on down to our coffee shop when you get the chance

H ope to see you soon during the week

O r on the weekend

P erhaps everyday of the week

 

Reviews

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship P..]

Very smart! I like Acrostics. Good luck with the contest! :)

Gothic Cowboy

[Chaos]

This is a fun and light acrostic. Nice work.

[LadyLove]

Geez, makes me want to step right into the picture and stay awhile!!! Just once, to go back in time to those days and feel that atmosphere of the 50's and 60's...wow! Oh well, at least you brought us there for a tiny spell here. Sure do appreciate it! I love it...the happiness and hospitality of this write. Blessings!

[George Love]

Excellent acrostic work

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Once again another fine arcostic... gives me that warm feel... it's always nice for friends to gather and just in such a friendly enviroment.

[Deborah Shepard]

acrostic..wounderful usage of the words etched perfect

[Samuel Dickens]

This sort of establishment is a fine piece of Americana, and you make me want to go there.

[pal]

I really like the twins in acrostic. A unique and complementary.

pal

[Michael]

I enjoy a cup of coffee more than I should. In fact, I am waiting on that first cup of the morning right now. your two poems make me want it all the more. I like how you used the word rather than the letter for the acrostic in the first one.

Great write!