Raindrops And Roses

Raindrops And Roses

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

Raindrops And Roses

 

R aindrops falling down

A dozen long stem roses

I  love you was written on a

N ote from you as these roses were

D elivered at my door

R omantic evenings spent with you

O ut on your elegant patio

P retty red roses you sent to me

S o lovely a gesture on a warm summer day

 

A dozen red roses to charm me

N ote that read I love you

D arling I do love you too

 

R emember the raindrops that fell

O n this warm summer day

S o sweet of you to send me lovely roses

E nchanting and sweet a memory you made

S o in this way I shall always cherish raindrops, roses and you

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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There is just something romantic and beautiful about the Rose!
A fabulous acrostic, well penned and a lovely read.

Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's amazing how certain things can conjure up a feeling of romanticism. I thought this piece to be sweet and pure of heart.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


What a beautiful thought and image. I hope it was true.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A touching, romantic piece. Love what you've done here, Deb! Excellent work! =D

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very touching and really great ideas here

Posted 16 Years Ago


AWW NOW THIS WAS SWEET AND AGAIN WITH PICTURE PERFECT AND THE WAY YOU USE YOU TITLE AS THE POEM GREAT JOB WRITING THIS PEICE I AM GLAD THAT YOU SHARED THIS WITH MY I WAS HONOR TO READ IT..GOD BLESS

Posted 16 Years Ago


Another wonderful arcoustic poem from you, this is really a strong suit... this one is rich with fantastic romantic images... Lovely work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very beautiful words to thank one for remembering you on a rainy day.

Posted 16 Years Ago


What a lovely Acrostic .. romantic and memorable.
That pictures compliments your poem very well!
Nice job. It's not easy writing Acrostics, but they sure
can be fun!


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2008

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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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