Marble Kisses

 

I melt into you at the

The touch of your skin

Pressing against mine

The way we fit together

Your lips so devine

Marble Kisses

As we make love

Wrapped in each other's arm

Captivated by the moment

Feeling such passion as

I melt into you

Reviews

[just is]

WOW! very passionate and sincere very well written. You are talented.

[Dalaina Renee]

Wow! Very cool poem! And I loved the photo!!

[Carole]

What a picture for inspiration, Deb! I have never heard that expression and love it. It speaks of endurance and something that stands the test of time. Nothing like a marble sort of love. Well done! Carole

[pal]

The poem with the picture.. took me into wildest fantasies..

bravo.

pal

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn now this is very sweet but sexy... so nicely done.

[Brenda Sue]

Very beautiful and passionate. Marble is strong, ever lasting, which is what we want when we fell in love. Wonderfully penned. Great picture.

[Deborah Shepard]

I love the marblized style

The beauty of each word tender loving

love and light passion light

[T]

Beautiful, loving and passionate poem ... hugs

[Jenny Davis]

I really like the imagery of marble in this piece, it makes the reader see that the two are intertwined deeply...very nice work! :)

[Chaos]

Marble is the best description for making love because it's so diverse, but holds the same way and when blended together, it makes the most beautiful picture.

I loved it.