No! No! No!

  

Seems my worst fears have come true

For you have left me sad and blue

Sometimes I find myself crying

Inside I feel like I'm dying

No! No! No!

I begged you not to go

But you left me all alone

No one to call my own

You don't even call me anymore

My heart is broken to the very core

Seems my worst fears have come true

For you have left me sad and blue

Reviews

[George Love]

Concept and word flow is good, but this is not a top of the heap work. The emotions are not quite a deep as you normally hit, but I know every work means something to someone and different things to different people. I found this one lacking somewhat in the powerful emotions you evoke from us.

[Chaos]

I believe one of my best qualities is that I speak from the heart; so here goes. I have read better pieces from you than this. I found the sentiment to be true, but I feel you have the talent to extend and expand on this concept to make it much powerful. I love the concept and flow over all.

[alternative_be]

The little mouse says it all. I like it when you are able to find a picture that is suitable to illustrate your poem.
Also the fact that you wrote it in blue makes it come across more powerful. The colour enhances your feelings, so does using the same sentence in the beginning and at the end. I like it!
Well, I hope you will not feel blue very long ...

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Sad, it always hurts when your love is not returned. Good wrtiting.

[Poeticpiers]

Yes .Yes.Yes short and to the point