Sometimes I Get Scared

 

S ometimes I Get Scared

 

S ometimes I get scared you might leave me

O ften I wonder if I could make it on my own

M y biggest fear is to be without you my love

E very now and then I feel you pulling away

T his is breaking my heart into pieces

I  hope it's not true these feelings I have

M y suspicions that you are falling away from me

E ach time you hold me in your arms

S omething just doesn't feel right

 

I t's not suppose to be this way

 

G ot to get a hold of myself

E ventually we'll have to talk about it

T onight perhaps would be the best time

 

S ometimes I get so scared you might leave me

C an we survive somehow and maybe work things out

A re you still in love with me or have I lost you to another

R eassurrance my darling is what I'm searching for

E verytime I look into your eyes I am so

D esparately in need of an answer from you

Reviews

[C.T. Bailey]

What a wonderful response to a painful issue. Written with humility, love, patience, compassion, sincereity, and hope. An embodiment of fidelity in poetry. The acrostic if wonderful and it keeps the reader "in touch" with the fact that you write fearfully throughout this piece. Super nice.

Todd

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great write, I can remember feeling like this several times in my relationships. Nicely done.

[shadadakiya]

very deep but beautiful!!!

[Chaos]

I love this piece. You touched on a feeling that all of us share from time to time and that is insecurity. Would it be the worst thing in the characters life to be alone; probably not? However, in the moment, her whole world feels like it's falling apart because her anchor is showing rust and that is a weakness.

Nice write.

[George Love]

This form fits you so well, it's like you put it on and let things flow. Very artistic work

[alternative_be]

A flawless fluently written acrostic! If you had not separated the first letters, I would not have noticed it was an acrostic and those are always the best!

Once again, your readers are able to feel your emotions and your doubts, which was your aim of writing this poem I suppose and you succeeded ... again. Well done, only while editing I suppose you left the t out of the word often, but that's a mere typo, I often find such mistakes while I read some of my works ...

Well I hope everything is well with you and that you are hanging in there!

[bluessadmood]

ohhh the ever lasting pain of does he really love will he be always around ,what if he breaks away ,oh what if i am suddenly alone,questions of lovers that will never end ,but i think better not not to fret to fall in love and end in a heart break ,i think we should love no matter if goes bad ,because that is life and its made ,lovely work as ever,moayad