Reflections

Reflections

 

I reach out and pull you back

As you slowly seem to be slipping away

Into a river of tears

Can you see our reflection

In these deepest of waters

You are not alone

For I am with you

Even unto the end of time

Dearest friend of mine

I'll always hold on

Even during these hardest of times

Just take my hand

My dearest friend

Let me see you smile again

 

 

Reviews

[Suelou]

Awwww, what a sweet poem. I like it.

[BrightEyes]

lucky is the person who has one true friend - or something like that the saying goes. the one we know will always be there for us; no matter what. what a gift this write is for whoever that friend is for you; to know that you are always there ready to lend a hand.

[George Love]

A treasure of heartfelt words from one friend to another. Very well said.

[Anarda Nashai]

This is exactly what a real friend would offer his/her troubled friend: no more, no less. I absolutely love this poem!!!!! Great Job.

-Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
Check out my website at:
www.anardanashai.webs.com

[Samuel Dickens]

There's nothing like being or having friends.

[Wildfleour]

This could be about two friends or about taking care of one's own self.

[lauren emily]

Like Tiana said, this is very sincere. You can feel the great friendship these people share. It's a very powerful piece.
Keep up the excellent work,
~Lauren

[T]

A beautiful poem of friendship, Debileah ... Very genuine and sincere ... hugs