My Love For You

I would follow you across the hottest sands

From the pyramid's of Egypt to the deserts of Africa

 

 Just to prove my love for you is true and sincere

I would gladly carry all your heavy burdens

 

I would follow you across the continents

Just to prove my love for you is true and sincere

 

King's and queen's, castle's and palace's cannot compare

To the love I hold in my heart for you my dear

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh this is beautiful! and so cute!
"King's and queen's, castle's and palace's cannot compare
To the love I hold in my heart for you my dear" - I loved these lines the most..so passionate!

[Lyndsay Castro]

This is really beautiful. Some people think love poems need to be elaborate or really long. But I love simplicity on that subject, and that's what you have here. It doesn't need frills or anything like that. It's just right!

[Dalaina Renee]

Very cute! How did you get those cammels on there?

[Gabrielle]

Great poem!

[George Love]

Very nicely worded, well metred work. I'm trying to be more scholarly in my reviews!

[bluessadmood]

wow my dear Debilia that was so sweet ,really you captured my attention with this ,this is so full of love ,it shows how sensitive and have great feelings ,you there is a song ,old one for the lovely PETULA CLARKE,it says something ,like ,you belong to my ,like, see the pyramids in old Algiers ,see the sun, sky and soveniers,see the night lights downtown ,you brought such sweet memories back ,i was really amazed by your words,lovely dear

[Gandré]

sweet surrender! loved it. "I would gladly carry all your heavy burdens" ----this is convincing...hmm we actually can call ourselves happy to have found someone who makes us to feel like this...hmmm.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Very cute! The camels are a creative addition! Cheers, lea