Wild Horses

Wild Horses

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

Wild Horses

 

Free

Freedom

Free as the sky

You are free my love

As free as the wild horses

Free to fly with the wind in your hair

As free as the wild horses

You are free my love

Free as the sky

Freedom

Free

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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I love shape poetry and I like your mirror. Now look into that mirror....and set yourself free. Lay your burdens down my friend.

Todd

Posted 16 Years Ago


well, of course, the title captured my attention...LOL.

I absolutely love how you set this poem up...very effective...your repetition of the use of the word "free" the whole way through is a nice touch.

being an avid equestrian, your message speaks to the heart...horses definitely lend a feeling of freedom.

VERY WELL WRITTEN!



Posted 16 Years Ago


Love it! Well written and excellent tone!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2008

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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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