My Own Disguise

When I think I can't write anymore

Kindof like the slamming of a door

 

Another poem appears

As I still shed these salty tears

 

Like raindrops falling down

The face of a made-up clown

 

i

realize

my own

disquise

 

When I think I can't write anymore

Kindof like the slamming of a door

 

Another poem appears

As I shed these salty tears

 

Like raindrops falling down

The face of a made-up clown

 

 

Reviews

[kaycee]

beautiful. i really enjoy this and the rest of your work i've read. i'm definitely a fan!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Another poem appears
As I shed these salty tears

Like raindrops falling down
The face of a made-up clown

could you have found anymore perfect words. I loved these two line. It's not as sad as other of yours I read. It's as if you found a peace inside yourself. Very nicely written. Excellent.

[Dale]

very interesting, and thought provoking.

[Carole]

So much healing in those tears. When I think of all of the uses for salt, I am reminded of the awesome God that we serve. He knew what He was doing when He created tears for cleansing and healing. :-)

I love how you repeated the two groups of words. It added impact! Well done!


When I think I can't write anymore

Kindof like the slamming of a door

Another poem appears

As I shed these salty tears

Like raindrops falling down

The face of a made-up clown


Thanks for sharing...Carole

[Suelou]

I sure know how that is. Sometimes, it is like my muse has up and deserted me. Then, all of a sudden, she overwhelmes me with so many poems. This is a sad one. I am so sorry for your tears. I hope things get better.

[Ray Hamilton]

It's good to get it out
I find writing a way of healing
Keep writing
Ray

[T]

The words always come back into our heads to form another poem or story..

"2 am and I'm still awake writing a song
if I get it all down on paper it's
no longer inside of me
threatening the life it belongs to" (from song called BREATHE)

so true...good write!!