day dream

day dreaming

about you

baby

like maybe

you'll come knockin

on my door

like you did

the night before

oh baby

i miss you

wanna kiss you

until the morning light

hold you oh so tight

please baby

be with me

tonight

i know honey

with you and me together

everything

will be alright

oh baby

i miss you

wanna kiss you

make this day dream

come true

then i won't be

so sad and blue

 

Reviews

[Suelou]

I have those same kind of day dreams. If only they would turn into reality, it's sure make me happy. LOL!

[waywithwords]

A beautiful rytham and one I could hope to sing too. HUGSxxxxxAnne

[Ray Hamilton]

Well written poem/song
I enjoyed the read
ray

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This poem is written like a song, you know how to make music? [smile] the words flow like a melody, it's that corny, mushy kind of love that is so attractive. Very nice write.

[Helena]

I thought song lyrics also when I read this wonderful poem.
Set music to it and you would have a great hit I think!
Still great as a poem though!!

~Helena~

[chloe cruz]

Really witty, and good!

[Becca]

Wow! Very clever! I like it!

[Brianna Brie]

This one reminds me of a song. Great day dream with rhyme.