All Alone

(just my thoughts tonight)

So you stopped by

One night

Out of the blue

Stopped by to see me

Kissed me hello

And waved goodbye

Left me to cry

All alone

Waiting for you

Here at home

Wondering now

Will you come again

Shall I call you friend

Until the end

Of time

Or will you have gone

For good

Leaving me

So misunderstood

Heartbroken am I

For it seems

You left me to cry

All alone

Waiting for you

Reviews

[Helena]

Thank you for submitting this loneliness write to my contest.

~ Helena

[Suelou]

I would want someone who is going to always be leaving. I have been there and done that before. Never again!

[Ray Hamilton]

When lost loves keep popping in and out of the picture
in my opinion it just makes things worse
But that's just my opinion
Well penned
Ray

[Helena]

Very nice indeed. Your muse is in a pensive mood tonight!

I liked the flow of this..well done!


~ Helena ~

[Fear Corrupts!]

i like the format...good rhyming too... ;)