troubles

troubles

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

troubles have befallen my household

ripping my heart to shreds

my soul bleeds

 

death has shrouded our door

mental illness has stricken our minds

our prayers forsaken

 

my angel's have been stolen away

the roots of our family tree broken and shattered

soon to be scattered by the gust of harsh winds

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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Feeling the intense emotions
that rip at the heart's reader
'my soul bleeds'

excellently written, feeling your sadness!!
hugs~~


Posted 16 Years Ago


wow this is a powerful piece. Hang in there, things will improve. Great job on the poem too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hang in there, my friend!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job. I hope this isn't based on true events though. That would be tragic!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 30, 2008
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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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