I cry me an ocean of tears

I cry me an ocean of tears

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

I  cry me an ocean of tears

 

C rying deep into the night

R emembering

Y ou

 

M y heart is broken

E vermore until eternity

 

A n ocean of tears do I cry

N ot to have you here by my side

 

O cean of tears do I cry

C radling memories of you and me

E vermore until eternity

A n ocean of tears do I cry

N ot to have you here by my side

 

O h how I pray for

F orever to come

 

T he lord taketh and the lord giveth

E ternally and forever

A re we to be apart for eternity

R obert my beloved

S on

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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The answer would be no and the poem is lovely with a hopeful visual. I wonder about the "here" in "Not to
have you here by my side". It reads with a better flow to me w/o the here. But hey...I read and write by ear being too lazy to count syllables.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Another wonderful acrostic. Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 29, 2008

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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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