gentle you

the gentleness that is you

whispering a kiss

across the nape of my neck

the soft brush of your hand

through my hair

letting me know that you care

the soft sparkle in your eyes

the trust i see there

sweet lingering thoughts of you

when you are not here

the gentleness that is you

Reviews

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this is sublime!!! Just beautiful, I loved every word here, you say it like you mean it, I felt this piece very deeply, the sign of a good writer...make your reader FEEL your work. It's like a lullaby, except better.
Nothing but praise for this and kudos...
Love,
Helen XXXX

[Blue Sky]

So soft and beautiful
with just the right touch of sensousness
it's very wonderfully vivid of gentle love!
beautifully written piece!

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I am gentle! you are soul!

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such a gentle flow with calm loving words...