She waits

She waits

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

Like a porcelain doll she sits

beneath a mighty tree

in the center of a stone laid circle

an ancient ruins be

A young maiden waits

a flower in her hand

As the sea washes upon the shore

revealing a stairway to the oceans floor

A forgotten city lies beneath these waves

As she breathes in the freshest air

A sea breeze ruffles her golden hair

Her lovely dress as blue as her eyes can be

as blue as the sky as blue as the sea

She waits for thee

 

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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This is beautiful and I agree with the reviewer below on the changing of the font colors. It adds impact to this write.

Like a porcelain doll she sits

beneath a mighty tree

in the center of a stone laid circle

an ancient ruins be

Very nicely done....:-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Lovely. I like how you wove details from the picture together into a seamless whole. Very nice indeed. Thank you so much for participating in the contest. :)


~Rogue Daffodil~

Posted 16 Years Ago


One of my favorites of yours.... I think it flowed quite well and I loved the different colors of the font... Your images were painted very well.... Good Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2008

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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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