diagnosis bipolar

diagnosis bipolar

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

D iagnosis bipolar disorder

I  have been labeled as such

A nother name for manic depression

G uess what

N o body knows the agony

O f this disease as well as

S omeone like me

I suffer to the extreme with

S uicidal highs and lows

 

B i polar disorder

I nsanity bouts of insanity

P erplex me

O nly if there were a cure

L ife would be much better I am sure

A manic mind knows no

Reasoning

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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I'm schizo effective, so I have bipolar, and man do I go crazy with up and downs, mania, great poem, --mishy

Posted 16 Years Ago


Excellent - not only a brilliant acrostic but such a passionate and descriptive writing about an often misunderstood illness. Thank you for sharing this :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


another acrostic! well done! I am bipolar too, I hate it.... simple enough eh? You did a very good job at conveying some of the feelings that go with being bipolar.. I adore how you centered this to the right.. that simple tactic gave the entire piece a chaotic edge.. there is always beauty to be found in presentation as well... great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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