The angel's kiss

T he angel's kiss upon my cheek

H ugs so sweet so heavenly

E ctastic with joy

 

A baby boy

N ow a grown man

G od must have heard my prayers

E arly in my

L ife

's weet you he sent to me

 

K isses from an angel on my cheek

I love you

S o sweetly

S o heavenly

Reviews

[Justin Tobey]

Unlike a lot of other love poems on the site, this one is actually love, not lust. An excellent job!

[Kaelani]

this is amazing! I LOVE IT!!!!!! its so deep and emotional and perfectly perfect! good job!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Aww this is so joyful and loving of a son, ---mishy xxxoo

[J. James Reider]

nicely done acrostic! may I suggest, foregoing standard poetry format and instead of centering the piece, align it to the left? it would do better for presentation... it is a very lovely piece:
A baby boy

N ow a grown man

G od must have heard my prayers

E arly in my

L ife

's weet you he sent to me

is one of the most loving stanzas I've seen written in awhile.... great job!