Goodnight Cafe

(stayed up too late, can you tell?)

G oodnight Cafe

O h my it's 4:54am

O  pen after hours

D ancing with poetic words

N ight is nearly over

I  hear the birds awakening with their songs

G ood night for writing it was for me

H ad a nice night now its early morn

T he words are running together

 

C alling me is slumber so sweet

A  nother poem, just one more

F inish it later for tomorrow's another day

E scalating across poetic skies

Reviews

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

You work graveyard shift?

I love acrostic poetry. I didn't know about it until about six months ago. You do this very well and I like the way you formatted it with the first letter then a space and the different colors every other line.

I wouldn't use "night" so much though.

[Illegitimate Artist]

Hehe Well you definitely made me smile! I know exactly what that feels like. Very cute piece!

[Jane Doe]

What a fun piece. I really liked this one. I can very much relate to it as most of my writing is done late at night/early in the morning. Great writing!

[nicole]

I loved this. It was very clever, & I loved the way it was written. I think the majority of us here on Writer's Cafe can relate to this poem (;