Silent Tears!

S ilent tears shed in the middle of the night

I  lie awake unable to sleep

L  ingering in my mind are thoughts of that horrific car crash

E scape...                             

N o...there is no escape

T wo people injured and two people died

 

T hese thoughts race through my manic mind

E scape...there is no escape...no place to hide

A s I feel such pain, hurt, and rage

R age...at losing my son because of a drunk driver

S ometimes I just lie here for hours...

Reviews

[Rain]

I hope that these lines weren't true, but I fear they are. I'm so sorry for your loss, which you put in words to this tragic poem. Rain..

[Jessi]

This is so paaionately sad, Very well put together, I feel your pain

[Arthur Henn]

S ilently I embrace you
I n my arms I hold you
m y prayer is to always love you
p arent, loving the one you lost
A llways will be your friend
T his poem of yours saddened my heart
Y ou my dear, I will always hold close to my heart

This was a superb poem written for one you love and lost, (I'm very sorry) he is still with you.

(((Hugs)))

Art

[Victoria Lee~]

WOW.. This is profound. Excellent writing and ever so heartbreaking.