Raindrop Kisses

The raindrops kissed the earth

As the winds whispered out your name

Teardrops formed in heaven

Touched ever so gently to the ground

 

All God's angel's cried

The day my baby died

And I wept, too

 

Teardrops formed in heaven

Touched ever so gently to the ground

The raindrops kissed the earth

As the winds whispered out your name

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rain]

This piece is painfully beautiful. I can't even imagine writing about it, but it is probably good for your soul. Rain..

[Jessi]

Beautiful, you have so much talent. Everything ive read is so well written

[Pj]

I love it. The format was so clever and the message just grabbed my insides. Thank you for sharing.

[imm's place]

exquisite heartwrenchin pen, mary

[Arthur Henn]

Nicely written words felt deep from within. The poem was wonderfully written. I really felt this part.

Teardrops formed in heaven
Touched ever so gently to the ground
The raindrops kissed the earth
As the winds whispered out your name

(((Hugs)))

Art

[FireAngel42029]

That was beautiful and sad at the same time if that makes any sense but I loved it

[waywithwords]

I lost a grandaughter at the age of eighteen months and this poem so very sad but beautiful in descriptive writing. I too shed a tear. HUGSxxxAnne

[morbid]

aw very sad but you made it so beautiful at the same time. its very nice

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

Haunting and beautiful- Very touching it brought a tear to my eye wonderful job my dear.

[Color Me Gone]

A poignant and lovely write~