So broken!

So broken!

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

some never know the true meaning of love

until it's been taken away

leaving your heart

so broken

that

it

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© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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Wow.....I love not only the poems but the form.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Fantastic imagery. Loved it and oh, so true.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow....this is short and to the very truth. i have lost an it felt my heart was bleeding. not a fun feeling to feel. but i guess life goes on and we write about it. very well written!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whew, girl, it bleeds creativity. Job well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

=( The things we take for granted huh. This was good, straight and direct. I like it =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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