As this poet's heart bleeds

As this poet's heart bleeds

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

A bleak shadow is cast down upon my life this very night

Darkness enthrones my heart as certain events unfold

Circumstances far beyond my control have surfaced

 

as this poet's heart bleeds...

for the future of my grandchildren not to be taken away

I am sore afraid of losing them forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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I do to pray that this never happens - blessings to you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


I will be praying for this not to happen and for what ever does happen to be fully God's perfect will in the situation..lol and God bless..Valentine

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is utterly heartbreaking! I pray that there is no truth to this sad piece.

jkb

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh honey the despair ..... it tumbles from the page like a landslide.

Such a powerfull piece.

Mx

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very touching piece, filled with raw and heartfelt emotions.
I am glad you said "Circumstances far beyond my control have surfaced"
Sometimes things happens in life that will always be out of our control, the question is what are you going to do about it?

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh, this poem is so sad...as the message pushes for compassion and understanding with increasing intensity.
Every parent's nightmare�Great emotional write
nice use of the word "sore"
Thanks for sharing that with us



Posted 16 Years Ago



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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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