On a loft up high!

on a loft up high

he said with a sigh

bury me on a loft up high

when the time comes for me to die

 

keep not my ashes in an urn

set my spirit free so i may return

 

bury me not deep in the ground

set my spirit free so i may return

 

on a loft up high

he said with a sigh

bury me on a loft up high

when the time comes for me to die

 

on a loft up high

where eagle's soar

across the sky

 

he said with a sigh

bury me there

and do not cry

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pinky]

How i loved the ending... this is truly a great piece... Sound like a suicide note my friend wrote... kinda of!

[Robert Luna]

Truly a wonderful write and such a pleasurable read. I love the imagery of this and the way it flowed so carelessly with such a wonderful class about it.


Great Job!!!!!!

[George Love]

Very well written! Love it!

[Babbette Francis]

I have to say, I have tears in my eyes. It just sounds like something my grandpaw would have said.
Awesome!!!