a ladder to the sky

if i could build me a ladder

unto the sky

 

i would carry with me

an artist's brush

 

and a pail of sparkling gold dust

to paint a picture of my memories of you

 

for all the angel's to see

i would surely climb

 

one rung at a time

to reach that heavenly place

 

if i could build me a ladder

unto the sky

 

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh! What a beautiful write it is!
I loved the imagery and the flow in it..Really Beautifully penned!
Amazing write :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Loved the imagery of this fantasy read. Thanks for sharing.

Great write.

[Writer CW Kirkland]

Thank you for submitting this to the Ladder to the Sky photo writing contest. I was especially impressed by this poem because of the way you told such a touching story in so few words. I like the flow of this poem as well. That is why I selected it as the first place winner for the contest. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.

[George Love]

Love this imagery, and the dream of fulfilling such a fantasy!

[Natasha Ashway]

Debileah, beautiful, lovely, amazing!
I enjoyed every word. Oh my!
Thank you for sharing x

[forfila]

This so nicely written with a beautiful concept of your love and appreciation for another.
I love it

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