campfire light

Campfire light. A Poem by debileah

 

Off in the distance, the sound of a flute.

As we lie together by this campfire.

Can you hear the howling of the wolves?

Restless on the twilight of the full moon.

Would you dance with me?

Dream with me, of days to come?

Kiss me oh so tenderly as our lips meet.

Warm me with your sweet embrace.

Touch my heart with your smile.

Let the flickering light shadow us.

The fresh air be our blanket.

May we breathe with a free spirit tonight?

Just you and I and the night sky.

How many stars do you see?

How many galaxies?

It's just you and me and the universe.

I am caught under your spell.

I am in wonder and awe of you.

For you are my destiny.

Dance on magicical camp fire light.

I hold the love of my life tonight.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

i really enjoyed the imaginative transporting opening this writing produces a quality vision within
the first 4 sentences which in turn reflects the talent behind the pen, before i was half way through,
i felt the exact word, spellbound, and felt myself become hypnotized by the sentimental, magical
sensual creativeness, stunningly beautiful, you have captured the night in your words, the soul's
campfire, the dreamy ambience of falling in love, absolutely consuming, eloquent, desirous, breathtaking!!

[Blue Sky]

Sensing a realm of magical moments of the night
by the soft glow from the camp fires is set all so nicely,
and the manner of the setting is wonderfully created
your intention to focus on the moment with inquiry format
to lead the eyes/senses to your very heart and soul
of the moment, the focused is nicely set into

hear the howling of the wolves?

Restless on the twilight of the full moon.

Would you dance with me?

Dream with me, of days to come?


and in the manner thou would like to be touched
which I really thought was very nicely done!



Kiss me oh so tenderly as our lips meet.

Warm me with your sweet embrace.

Touch my heart with your smile.

Let the flickering light shadow us.

The fresh air be our blanket.

Very nicely done, imagery was just fabulous, your wonderful piece
took to that very moment, and though with there were inquiries
I really thought of them as mere focals to that night and how you want it.
Very very nicely written!!! Great write!