One that Whispers

You are the One that makes

My heart skip a beat

You are the only you

And the only me

With a whisper

Of you

You turned my grey skies

Blue

My love

It’s only you

The one

 For me


Although this is new

  You are mind blowing

    To look from afar

      To see the yes

         Of us

           To go between

The exciting feeling

  That filled the room

     Exciting to me

To see

  The love of you

     The way you spoke to me
 

         Let me whisper your name
 

             Let you think of the same

                You gave me what I needed

It was mine to take

    It was you

       That saved the day

           To taste the reality of your lips

                Would be a dream of mine

 

Just

 

Whisper

 

Please share your love

 

  With me

 

    Join me in ecstasy

 

       Take me on a trip

 

           Around your world

 

Just 

 

Whisper

 

Whisper my name

 

Whisper you the same

 

Just 

 

Whisper

 

Debbie Brooks

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Strong feelings you've pondered into the page. Liked the imagery. In love, the word "Whisper" is everything that loved-spirits need to beloved with... ov'r the nights. Well written!

[marcus]

I like it, it's a nice love poem.