What you think is true...

your truth from a child's eye

What you say is true,

True is what you say,

The world is growing grey,

That the people who prey,

Have their blood to stray,

It is very true when you say,

Life is struggling under the shadow of the evil,

That good is being masscred by the devil,

 

 

But why dont you see the world through my eyes,

And see how life flies ,

From the bonds of slavery,

That life will not be a bondsman anymore,

If  we in our heart''s core,

Get love to lure us,

Then we can stop the destruction's bus,

On the terminal,

And enjoy our life's carnival....

Reviews

[Latifa]

very nice poem great job i enjoyed the last verse

[Antoñyo]

Important message cleverly-written. I thoroughly enjoyed it,

Thanks for sharing

[Queen of Words]

well u will be surprised to know this poem was written by me when 1 was in 8th standard in rply to my friends very depressing comments ablout the world..

[Antoñyo]

Not surprised at the that, but the talent, yes! I've been writing since as far back as I can remember but not with your talent.

[Queen of Words]

thanq for your kind appraisal.. :)