suicide

Drip Drop
Drip Drop
The tub is slowly filling with crimson red blood
The water is getting colder
My vision is fading
My lips are chapped
My tounge swollen
I blink once more and than death takes over me

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

FIND A NEW PERSPECTIVE ON LIFE..
START BY CHANGING YOUR PROFILE NAME.

GESHHHHHHHH

[Dave]

I sincerely wish this was just an exercise in your writing. I know that life can so often be a horrible challenge. I too have written along these lines. You might be interested in reading my: Dark Visitor.

Take care - Dave

[Chris]

I've lost too many friends to "appreciate" the silence.

[deathwish]

I'm sorry. Good luck

[Chris]

to you as well

[Chris]

oh - in the last line "than" to then.