Life

Life

A Poem by Lovekiller09
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this is about life

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Life is to short waste so...go for! It a while shot when your gone your gone so make the most of it 

© 2016 Lovekiller09


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i think you are right ! no time to waste

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Try this.

"Life is too short waste so...go for it! It's a wild shot when you're gone you're gone so make the most of it"

I like yours. Just a suggestion. Nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lovekiller09

8 Years Ago

ok but i love mine beause someone who i dont get to see no more wrote that and gave it to me...but t.. read more
Hope Rose

8 Years Ago

Ah okay. No problem. It was just a suggestion
There a few errors I think.
"It a while shot when your gone"/ i think is should be, "It's a while shot when you're gone"
Otherwise, it's a great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't hesitate to take the hard road, it may be the right road. Excellent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehehe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovekiller09

8 Years Ago

thanks shadowfax
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

welcome, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Added on January 14, 2016
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