Life

this is about life

Life is to short waste so...go for! It a while shot when your gone your gone so make the most of it 

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[wordman]

i think you are right ! no time to waste

[Hope Rose]

Try this.

"Life is too short waste so...go for it! It's a wild shot when you're gone you're gone so make the most of it"

I like yours. Just a suggestion. Nice work

[Lovekiller09]

ok but i love mine beause someone who i dont get to see no more wrote that and gave it to me...but thanks :):):):):):)

[Hope Rose]

Ah okay. No problem. It was just a suggestion

[Tsubaki Kuro]

There a few errors I think.
"It a while shot when your gone"/ i think is should be, "It's a while shot when you're gone"
Otherwise, it's a great poem.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Don't hesitate to take the hard road, it may be the right road. Excellent.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

I think this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehehe

[Lovekiller09]

thanks shadowfax

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh