Love in Verbs and Pronouns

I looked, I saw. He looked, he saw. I waved, he winked. I winked, he waved. I walked, he walked. He stopped, I stopped. I stared he talked. He stared, I talked. I smiled, he grinned. We walked, we talked. We grinned, we smiled. We sat, we ate, he paid. We flirted, we kissed. I walked, he walked, I looked he saw. I smiled, I waved. He winked, he grinned…

 

 

I walked, he stared. I stopped, I cried. I vowed, he vowed. We kissed. They cheered, we smiled. They smiled, we cheered. We lived, we laughed, we cried, we loved.

Author's Note

I did this for a contest. I only could use verbs and pronouns, so it's not that awesome. Suggestions would be awesome! If you didnt get what happened, they got married, but I understand if you didn't, cause I've never written a love story before.

Reviews

[LunarSong]

I think you're good at telling a story with just verbs and pronouns ;)

[Brenden Moran]

Quite the unique write you have here, good job:)

[PyroKitty24]

Yes, I did understand what was happening, which means you did a good job writing it! I never thought anyone could make much of a story using only certain words, but it came out very nice!

[Freeminded]

Its a really good poem!! I love the way there is actually a story in verbs and pronouns!
If you're not pleased with it come back to it in a month or so and you'll see what needs improving, though I think its good as it is. Well done!

[rae52]

it's cool i like it