The Prophesy of Elanhill

Wrote this for a group. Ain't that great.

When the battles rage,

And Elanill is lost,

The two children of men,

Shall come forth.

The elves reunite,

The dwarves reappear,

The fairy’s magic restored,

And the birds voice returned.

The children of men come together,

And the prophesy has begun.

By night they look one way,

By day they look another,

At dawn they look together,

At dusk they look apart.

The dragons then will come,

And the riders atop,

To help Elanill,

Defeat the foes.

The elves and dwarves,

Fight side by side,

And the fairy’s and birds

Come together.

They work away their pasts,

Their arguing forgotten.

With death in the air,

The foes shall retreat,

The swords stop their ringing,

And the prophesy,

              Will be complete

 

Side note: Prophesy can be spelled Prophesy and Prophecy. Either one works.

Author's Note

This is so not very good, and I'm horrible at fantasy, but it works. It's a prophesy, though not a very good one, but oh well. It works.

Reviews

[PyroKitty24]

I really liked this~ prophecy is spelled wrong, the wrong form of fairies is used, and I'm not sure if you meant the spacing to be like that for the last line. but besides that, i think this poem is perfection~ You should submit it to some contests if you haven't already! There are some fantasy contests that would really appreciate this!

[Brittany Zedalis]

You lie when you say this is not very good. I think it's brilliant.

[Dearantlers]

Haha, thanks!

[Ice Girl]

So good!!!

[Archia]

I quite liked this and how it was all tied together nicely at the end.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Sounds a lot like something that would be in the Lord of the Rings books.

[Sarah]

this is realy good. nice work.

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I really enjoyed this piece,
This is really good.

[Shalini Dinesh]

I actually thought this was good, its like some climax in a movie , good write, i enjoyed reading it....

[Dalrymple]

Great fantasy work.

[LunarSong]

I think it's great, a story could defiantly revolve around it. Remember, short stories :)