Karli

How i felt the other day.

Why are you so good to me?

You could just say no and I’ll be on my way.

No regrets, I’ll be the same without you tomorrow and today.

No bears forged of cloth, or flowers made of love, to pull you down in any way.

Ill fill my heart with other love tomorrow and today.

Hoping my dissolute sadness never bothers me in any way.

Because it could all be different in a dream or a cloud far, far away.

I could’ve fell in love so fast, forever tomorrow and today.

But how could I, when dreams are only dreams no matter how far, far away.

Either way I hope things go okay for you, forever, tomorrow and even today.

I imagined things going different in my dreams, but dreams are only dreams aren’t they?

Reality, sweet and brutal where love is love, and things don’t change, tomorrow and even today.

I’ve learned never to let yourself too deep into a certain way.

Because you banish into a shadow cursed under dark days,

That never end.

Author's Note

I try

Reviews

[Lupus Kaos]

Good representation of your feelings. The whole thing was as if it was drawing in my mind while I read it. Keep on writing and expressing for you do it good. Sometimes, as I see in your poem, long lines express deeper feelings for they consist of more and better told words. It was a good one and I think it deserves to read, how you felt.

[C.M. Dakota]

I can totally relate to this