Long Forgotten

Depressed as all s**t.

All the hateful things in my past,

Now long forgotten.

Those three little words,

Are what makes me tick.

Those words now a reminder,

Of what could have been,

Replaced now with,

An unforgivable sin.

A Freak of Nature,

I now am.

Forever left here,

To die all over again.

The last thing you shall hear,

Are the words that hold us dear.

I asked for you to marry me, 

I only wish I would have been on one knee.

I've lost the love I once knew,

Now I'm broken in two. I knew that one day,

The love I held for you,

Would come to start anew.

When that day comes,

Can you say "I love you too?".

Reviews

[Lexi Villanueva]

You are impressive with all your writing on this one.

[Lee]

''Those words now a reminder, of what could have been...''
This line and the lines that follow really emphasize this deep pitted pain that sprouts into What if's and a form of crazy frustration when love's not returned. I liked what and how you spoke this out.

[Caitlynn Cusick]

whos this about? its prolly not me but... you know i love you.. right?

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

No, not about you. That's all I'm gunna say

[Caitlynn Cusick]

its ok im already over it... after you told nikki we were just friends i got over you fast... dont worry :)