My Offering

Lightning so bright,

Before the bird takes flight.

I offer my sorrow,

So the bird may live til 'morrow.

 

Thuder so loud,

The bird flies as high as a cloud.

I offer my life,

So thy bird may not strife.

 

Rain so pattering,

I pray the bird is not flattening.

I offer my soul,

So the bird may reach its goal.

Reviews

[♪Barklight♪]

beautiful immagery

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

why thank you :) my writing isn't so depressed right now

[♪Barklight♪]

^_^