The Dead Speak

Something that just slapped me like a dead person talking.

Sometimes I wish to slit your throat,
Line you up and snort you like coke.
You ruined me once,
Now I'm back,
To kill all you slacks.

You piss me off,
And make my list.
My list is not safe,
You're in line with my fist.

I only think of death as temporary,
Never lasting forever.
I will come from my grave,
And kill you all.

Once the dead speak,
Life is over,
According to all the geeks,
I am just a freak.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Great first two lines.....really makes one sit up immediately and TAKE NOTICE. A very angry write that jumps from the page. "Once the dead speak, Life is over..." good ending.

Don't agree with the last two lines tho' LOL I'm sure you are not that!

[Lexi Villanueva]

i understand your wrting how you express it through words i write poems like this kinda but this is really good

[C.C. Marx]

Crap, this is seriously intense, im not sure whether to applaud or cower in the corner.....maybe both? Anyways great job

[Toni Blackerby]

i really like it anthony its very good like u always do