NEEDS A NAME

You want to run and hide,
But I want to stay and die.
Death is looming over my shoulder.
All light fleeing before him.

God has let me fall,
But in death soon I shall stall,
The way he wants to rule over them all.

Lucifer isn't bad,
Just misunderstood.
He rebelled in Heaven,
When the 'Holy One' went mad.

Madness is common,
But always over looked.
Soon you shall become hooked.

The thought of death,
Going through your head.
While your hiding,
But soon your going to be dead.

Life is not real,
But it is only what you feel.
On a fishing hook,
It needs to be reeled.

Chose wisely,
As this is your last chance.
To  die and save some time.
Or to run and hide and soon be killed.

Reviews

[forevermore1218]

fantastic job mate. I know it's not the best thing to say about a poem since it isn't as essential as the words themselves but I LOVE the way you used a different font then default. It honestly made the poem stand out more in a way that really caught my eye. The poem itself was fabulous as usual and I am very happy I got a chance to partake in it.

Loved it :)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you so much for taking the time to read this poem and review it.

[Seanh12]

This is very good. I like your style.

[♪Barklight♪]

The wrath of the heavans,
and those who are really hiding.
Shows a little-seen perspective ^_^ cool.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you Barklight. And I love it how you picked up on what i was saying without actually saying it.

[♪Barklight♪]

Thnx ^_^

[Anexi]

Wonderful as always my friend.

[Toni Blackerby]

anthony i wish i was as good as u at writing its a 100 man

[EileenMarie]

The rhyming scheme is good... This is too dark for my liking but you are a bet good writer !

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

friend was wanting something dark written for him, so I wrote this...