The Demon Inside

A true story of what is going on right now in my life.

Death is like a rose,

Beautiful and dangerous.

Inside me, being scared never shows.

The feeling of dread,

And wanting to rip off your head.

Here it comes,

And there it goes.

The demons in my soul,

Are blacker than coal.

They are meant for me,

So I want you to leave.

Drop me off here so that I may grieve.

My life drains away,

As I hold the torture at bay.

If it's going to be slow,

Please make it painful.

Their pain kills me,

Their sorrow only I can see.

They say 'We'll take it away.'

But forever it shall stay.

Reviews

[forevermore1218]

Loved this one. Its going in my library :)

Personally i love the last stanza and how you ended it with:
They say 'We'll take it away.'
But forever it shall stay.
Loved the essence and how soul jerking that ending was. It, I think made the poem for me. It was a really good write :)
keep up the good work mate!

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

this is what is really happening, I was half-assed possessed when this was written. It was written by a Rouge Demon named Rose...

[forevermore1218]

that was shown clearly but whether it was you or rose, it came within your soul so did give anyone other then yourself for writing it. you deserve it

[Rhianne Ney]

You have a point taken...
I love the poem
Keep writing! (: