The Demon Inside

The Demon Inside

A Poem by Anthony Q Armstrong
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A true story of what is going on right now in my life.

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Death is like a rose,
Beautiful and dangerous.
Inside me, being scared never shows.
The feeling of dread,
And wanting to rip off your head.
Here it comes,
And there it goes.

The demons in my soul,
Are blacker than coal.
They are meant for me,
So I want you to leave.
Drop me off here so that I may grieve.

My life drains away,
As I hold the torture at bay.
If it's going to be slow,
Please make it painful.

Their pain kills me,
Their sorrow only I can see.
They say 'We'll take it away.'
But forever it shall stay.




© 2012 Anthony Q Armstrong


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Loved this one. Its going in my library :)

Personally i love the last stanza and how you ended it with:
They say 'We'll take it away.'
But forever it shall stay.
Loved the essence and how soul jerking that ending was. It, I think made the poem for me. It was a really good write :)
keep up the good work mate!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anthony Q Armstrong

12 Years Ago

this is what is really happening, I was half-assed possessed when this was written. It was written b.. read more
forevermore1218

12 Years Ago

that was shown clearly but whether it was you or rose, it came within your soul so did give anyone o.. read more



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"Their pain kills me,
Their sorrow only I can see.
They say 'We'll take it away.'
But forever it shall stay."


Very good write, scary and chilling. Graphic was pretty scary too! Well done.

Thank you for submitting this to my gothic contest!

Helena



Posted 11 Years Ago


Like this one, "their pain kills me, their sorrow only I can see". And (although I hate having to say it but he'll give me hell if I don't) Marcius is fond of it too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i LOVE this poem, it speaks a thousand words, love it! one of my favorites that i've read on this website!!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Yet again another great poem my friend. It is true that when we write we sometimes let the minds eye within our own heads take over. For that is what happens when I write 'Phantom' and Im saying from personal experience that when he finally shows himself and comes out within my writing its sort of a rush that you would have to experience yourself. To let the darker side come out at times through my writing is a release of all the stress of my personal life therefore to be put on paper for all to see. But this is a very impressive poem you have a rare talent for the dark and disturbing let alone the macabre like Poe. Nice Work keep writing.

-Tips hat off to him-

-Writer *78*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really well written! I can really feel your pain in this piece!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok ur stuff is better than mine lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


very powerful write .... i love it ...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your poem expresses much turmoil and confusion. The reader can feel the struggle as you attempt to control the conflict. And because you care for others you recommend that they stay away or distance themselves from the beast. Interesting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love such pouring out of mind in poetic and delightful manner.you sought every possible pain to put in it emotional aspect.GREAT RYHME AND SIMPLISTIC...KEEP WRITING;-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Anthony Q Armstrong
Anthony Q Armstrong

Chapel Hill, TN



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Honestly, I am not much of a person. I have been writing poetry, it coincides with my life, since I was little. Most of what i write on here is to express my slef, and make myself feel better. Being a.. more..

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