Sorrowful Love

Sorrowful Love

 

I feel sorrow from my love,

It pains me to feel it this way,

I wish it would just choose one person,

And stay with that person.

 

I wish I could fix everything,

I want all the drama to stop,

I feel like I am being tortured,

Tortured enough to be killed,

 

I want it all to stop now,

It kills me to see my life this way,

I wish it would be back to normal,

But I wish to keep the one I love the most.

 

I wish I could give each person I love another try,

So they can see the real side of me,

So they can see the truth,

Of whom I really am.

 

Let all that has happened go away,

It tires me to think of this,

I went here and there,

But I found no true love.

 

Let the world make me suffer,

Since the love I ruined is full of sorrow,

And the world wants me to pay them,

Pay them for everything that I have done.

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Your poem expresses very heartfelt emotion. You have a skill at using words to describe how your feel. You said, "So they can see the real side of me". Anyone reading this poem would come a long way to knowing you. And while we can't be responsible for how everyone else feels, it's nice to know that at least one person cares. And, even when we lose a loved one we can always find another. You did well in this poem.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Thank you soooo much pencrafter

[Irene]

beautiful poem. i can feel the emotion behind your words

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

thank you

[EileenMarie]

Very deep and filled with emotion.....
Great write.......

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Thank you