woman? (dunno)

kind of inspired by the anonymous poem western wind

where is hard salt wind
for my cracking lips,
that i can from eyes
find some strong eclipse;
she is far and far
while i, the abyss,
oh God who made her-
what be, cure can this?

Author's Note

ignore punturation and grammar. lack of caps is strictly laziness

Reviews

[Dianah]

Fascinating. Would like to see more of your work.

[Mistaken]

it has a very nice flow...I agree haha but there isn't much wrong at all...I like it!

[Lauryn Nicole]

I like it! It has a nice flow to it and I like the format. Well done!