Completely Sublime

Who say you can't respect a woman and crave her at the same time?

 

When I watch you talk,

not only am I riveted

by your first class thoughts,

I can’t help but get lost

in the image of those sultry lips

moistening my skin

with nice and naughty intentions.

 

When you work with your hands

it thrills me that you are

the kind of woman

who’s not afraid to get dirty

while secretly getting excited

at the thought of you working me.

 

When I see you walk with confidence

I get a sense of pride in knowing

the woman inside,

yet I cannot deny

it also makes me ache

to be between those thighs.

 

I really love and respect

the depth of your heart and mind

though it also invokes

a lust that I won’t deny

Reviews

[cilla]

And what girl wouldn't like to be seen through those eyes? Still working a little bit of wicked into those innocent poems. Good to see you haven't lost your touch. Keep 'em comin' Dale ... this was another good one.

~Cilla~

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the title! This poetic sexy poem would be awesome on a sexy card for a young lady! This was beautiful and very passionate!

[Nautili]

Confidence is sexy, and it sounds like your interest knows just how to captivate and hold your attention....

[Laura Maidah]

This might make a great performance piece.

Those who are unreachable, are the true muses, to muse... these are more clever, and lovingly curious to discover. Such an awesome definition of elusiveness here. The perfect wording and ode to it. Amazing work Dale.

E.L.

[Bare trees]

I've known this feeling. It almost makes you wonder if your intentions are lustful only, which for guys is easy. But it's not. You prove that with this poem. Nice.

[Dezaraye]

This is such a sweet love poem. I love the level of respect here and wanting her not for just her looks and her body, but for those more meaningful, deeper things. This is what all women look for and few find.