Completely Sublime

Who say you can't respect a woman and crave her at the same time?

 

When I watch you talk,

not only am I riveted

by your first class thoughts,

I can’t help but get lost

in the image of those sultry lips

moistening my skin

with nice and naughty intentions.

 

When you work with your hands

it thrills me that you are

the kind of woman

who’s not afraid to get dirty

while secretly getting excited

at the thought of you working me.

 

When I see you walk with confidence

I get a sense of pride in knowing

the woman inside,

yet I cannot deny

it also makes me ache

to be between those thighs.

 

I really love and respect

the depth of your heart and mind

though it also invokes

a lust that I won’t deny

Reviews

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Very well expression of admiration and desire :)

[An owl on the moon]

You speak of a bit of the mystical magic that flows from those most wondrous of women... that sense of strength and beauty... the tenderness and caring... and within, the sensual passions that wait to be unleashed... Powerful.

[Cassie Fraga]

thats right.... knows what a woman wants.... AWESOME WRITE MY FRIEND!! makes me feel all gooooweeee inside! hahahahaha!!

[Madison A. Wright]

the power of confidence and swagger another woman posses make them that more attractive and we cant help but be drawn to this.. i love the poem i think anyone can easily relate to your feelings with this one... well done!!

[Phoenix]

Perfect....just the way a woman should be respected and treated.

[Poetic Beauty]

To be loved for the heart and soul is much better than to be longed for because of fleeting beauty. The depth of the person is what matter the most and I would rather be loved for my inner spirit than lusted after for the outer beauty that will evolve into something different one day. I like how you put love respect and lust all in one piece. This is delicate and smooth. There is beauty in being sensual and sexual. Well done.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very nice. The appreciation of a true sensual woman who is also intelligent, strong and wise

[Robbie~xoxo~]

NICE!! Such Sensual imagery!...You have captured the essence of provocative thoughts of her, and still manage to incorporate love and respect for her heart and mind. Wow! This is extremely enticing! This is what most women desire to hear. Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like those woman who can be strong and beautiful. Give them a bonus skill to tempt the mind and heart. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote