Wicked Sensation

Some temptations are undeniable.

 

As I watched her saunter

towards me with my wanton eyes

those sultry hips swing like a pendulum

that put me under a spell

convincing me that I was hungry

like a wolf stalking the night.

Though she was the prey

I felt like the victim of original sin

and I would pay any price

to feel the punishment.

I could taste her lips when I licked mine

even though we never kissed,

turning this craving into a ring of fire.

By the time she caged me inside her shadow

I was paralyzed by a fear

that had me floating on cloud nine.

Trembling, not of fright,

rather an uninhibited desire.

As her voluptuous frame captured my body

I felt her fingers claw my back

deep enough to penetrate my heart;

that became the climax of my soul’s destiny.

When she buried my remains

thirteen feet deep

my spirit descended with the purpose

of shaking hands with the devil

and thanking him for giving me

a purpose for dying without remorse.

 

Reviews

[Dezaraye]

Very well done and vivid. Naughty, Cowboy, making temptation seem so much fun. :-P

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a very good poem, full of youthful energy. And the last line is brillant,
enigmatic, bursting with black humour, clever, witty. One of the best poems I have read from this poet, great work.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh My!!! Wow! Sexy, Sexy, Sexy!!! I love this!...more please...

You have combined all the wonderful elements of a great story (this could be an intriguing story!)... and all the elements of a sensual write that captivate me as a reader. Well done...very impressive!

[Poetic Beauty]

A deal with the devil always has a twist involved. I like the wording and the way this poem flows. The thoughts are clear and potent. The last two lines hit a home run on this.

[Bare trees]

It sounds like you might have caught on to Robbie's vibe on this one. ha You always have your own style though different than anyone else. Yes it's a poem about desire and temptation but also has a sense of rebellious pride to it im some wys. I alwasy enjoy your work and this is an excellent poe. I'm also a tad drunk and this is the second time i'm doing this review. I forot to log in the first time.,LOL no more reviews for me toniht.

talking the night. (taking?)