Heaven's Light

A senryu

 

The influence of

Moonbeams caressing your face

Made me see the light.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Moonlight has a magical effect... you have captured the magic in this Romantic piece. Breathtaking.

[Priscilla Sayers]

how on Earth to you just bring out the intensity of passion in three lines? I think I starting to crush on a "Cowboy" Uh oh! LOL
I love the way you write, I am so glad to have read your pieces.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautiful.......:)

[Seashell]

Awwww wow
Just
Awww wow

Cute, smart and warm

Well done again
BB xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Awesome!

[Stacey Watts]

This was beautiful I kind of thought about angels when I read this. I am not sure why. I was just thinking about them today. (Random thought) Anyway the words make this soft and romantic. Very well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

A bright moon can make a beautiful face come alive and allow us to see the real beauty and the night become more alive. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote