Independence 101

Independence 101

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Uptown doesn’t mean

You are down

With the beat.

Money may not

By happiness

But it sure can

Finance madness.

 

Cut the ties

Cause the

Puppeteer

Doesn’t know better,

Only the joy

Of how pulling

The strings

Moves his pocket.

 

Don’t let them

Play with your head

Like a toy

In a square.

Remember that

Jack In The Box

Only pops out on cue.

 

A mushroom

Is a vegetable

And you are not

On life support.

Don’t help

Their garden grow.

Till and enrich

Your own soul

So you can feed

The world

On your own.

 

© 2012 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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the hunger toys with our head...even a king of the jungle can fall into the trap of living in a cage to not have to hunt and risk his life any more...

Posted 13 Years Ago


"A mushroom
Is a vegetable
And you are not
On life support.
Don’t help
Their garden grow.
Till and enrich
Your own soul
So you can feed
The world
On your own."

Phenomenal stanza and the continuation of toy relations to money... This is really perceptive and perfectly penned toward the message. I had to read this a few times because I have to really appreciate how much it all connects. Stunning read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well said, my man! I've always told my children; Don't be a follower, lead you own life, choose your own path. Amazing write!

Denise


Posted 13 Years Ago


"Your own soul
So you can feed
The world
On your own."
Wise words in the poem. Better to be the lonely wolf then the cattle being led to slaughter. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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