Simply Beautiful?

Just a short one

 

The sun brightens up the sky

but hides more that should be seen.

So wait till midnight before you judge

whether the space

is half empty or half full.

 

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wise words Dale... using space rather than glass a very good touch ...!

Chloe

[EmpressPoetess]

Great words of wisdom! It gives you food for thought, indeed!

[emmajoy]

Yes, yes, yes .. we can be blinded by the sun, too bright, too much. But as it gets darker and darker, we can see what we want or not .. maybe it has something to do how many stars there are, what kind of magic they're creating.

[Norma M Sutton]

This has a odd sort of broken rhythm to it. Not sure how I feel about that, but I like the intent :)

[Aella.lives]

I read it to fast the first time and had to reread, I like it! Short but packs a punch. :)

[Lily Mae]

Always full...because she's blond lol..xo

[Coyote Poetry]

The midnight hour answer many good questions. I like the mystery at the end of the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote