Simply Beautiful?

Just a short one

 

The sun brightens up the sky

but hides more that should be seen.

So wait till midnight before you judge

whether the space

is half empty or half full.

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great little write. The day time and the night time have great qualities about them and when the sun goes down it is easier to see the whole sky.

[Emerald Seas]

Interesting twist to vision between your day and evening. I like it! My glass is always half full, even when I'm wallowing. I know there are better days ahead.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is beautiful in its simplicity... Yes, midnight brings wonderful things to the surface...Nicely done!

[Liza]

or if the space really exists :)
thought provoking

[Richy Moon]

Well spoken.

Very well said Dale! The balance and wisdom is within your words.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Nice work, Cowboy! The sky certainly has much beauty!

[LadyNaida]

This is very true. Love it!

[Kenneth The Poet]

A very wise musing, Dale. As far as I see, the box is always full. Of what, I don't know.

Nice words.