Natural Lesson

a haiku

 

Let it rain on me

For I know it’s nature’s way

Of teaching freedom.

Reviews

[E. Ryan Miller]

For such a few short lines - very thought provoking. It stops just as it's getting started and leaves the reader hanging, which induces thought. Love it.

[Muse]

The rain reminds us to clear our heads...to think clean thoughts. ;)

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that is simply beautiful

[Lily Mae]

I love the rain..to play,dance and sing and play and play and oh be barefoot..:) it frees the soul like no other one thing..xo

Ain't that the truth, why complaining if it rains, if it can free your soul like your words do mine! :) wonderful. People who not appreciate rain, are spoiled! :)

[The Analog Kid]

Very cool haiku. It makes me want to write one. Perfect 5-7-5.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love, reign o'er me. Nice work.

[Liza]

you're reigning with rain raining on you without an umbrella :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The Rain is amazing in its entirety... You have captured the rain in its purest form. Freedom~ LOVELY write!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

absolutely liberating!~